The Things We Blame
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It was the cold
the freezing cold
my ears were shut
I have to
tell you
something
Then it was the sun
the freaking sun
I couldn’t see
I have to
show you
something
Then it was me
without my hands
or legs
I have to
give you
something
And at the end
it was just me
(Nobody else)
Photograph by Ryan McGuire
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Love the simplicity and how you creatively used all the senses in the theme of trying to give but failing to do so at all these different levels. A lot of emotion in this one.
Thank you Anna. I am glad you like it. My favorites are abstract and minimalist poems so that is why I tend to write in that way. 🙂